Csec Compound
Friday, 13:52
The teletype sputtered to life, spewing forth yet another transmission. Will reached over and ripped off the printout and scanned it before crumpling it up into a tight ball. One eye shut, he aimed for the wastebasket.
“Bloody crap.
I Had the Write Idea 
Great six. Can’t wait to see what it said.
By: Jennifer Duffey (@jenduffey) on September 11, 2011
at 7:36 am
Good action verbs: sputtered, ripped, scanned. I’ll be sure to check next week’s entry to hear the message! (I love the photo on your blog.)
By: Sandy Nachlinger on September 11, 2011
at 9:39 am
4 sentences instead of 6? Fine, just keep me hanging. Sigh. Guess I’ll have to come back next week, eh?
By: karysafaire on September 11, 2011
at 8:55 pm
Wasn’t sure if those first two lines with the location and time counted as sentences and because I hadn’t done this before, I decided to err on the side of caution. Kind of sucked to leave it in the middle of someone speaking, though.
By: victanguera on September 11, 2011
at 8:57 pm
Yep. And hopefully you enjoy the next six. :}
By: victanguera on September 12, 2011
at 10:10 am
Yummy six! …when wil you feed me more? 😉
Seriously, though… very nicely written 🙂 I love how his line shows us he didn’t make the basket, rather then just telling us.
Nice job!
By: 1000th.monkey on September 12, 2011
at 8:06 am
Next week. Although I do have more of this written. It’s still pretty raw, though.
By: victanguera on September 12, 2011
at 10:08 am
Must not have been a pleasant message. I think you were wise to err on the side of caution. 🙂 Great six. Can’t wait for next week!
By: lexcade on September 12, 2011
at 9:20 am
Hmm, I wonder what it said. Great Six. 🙂
By: Amy Ruttan on September 12, 2011
at 9:55 am