Posted by: victanguera | September 11, 2011

Psychic Wars (Six Sentence Sunday)

Csec Compound
Friday, 13:52

The teletype sputtered to life, spewing forth yet another transmission. Will reached over and ripped off the printout and scanned it before crumpling it up into a tight ball. One eye shut, he aimed for the wastebasket.

“Bloody crap.

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Responses

  1. Great six. Can’t wait to see what it said.

  2. Good action verbs: sputtered, ripped, scanned. I’ll be sure to check next week’s entry to hear the message! (I love the photo on your blog.)

  3. 4 sentences instead of 6? Fine, just keep me hanging. Sigh. Guess I’ll have to come back next week, eh?

    • Wasn’t sure if those first two lines with the location and time counted as sentences and because I hadn’t done this before, I decided to err on the side of caution. Kind of sucked to leave it in the middle of someone speaking, though.

    • Yep. And hopefully you enjoy the next six. :}

  4. Yummy six! …when wil you feed me more? 😉

    Seriously, though… very nicely written 🙂 I love how his line shows us he didn’t make the basket, rather then just telling us.

    Nice job!

    • Next week. Although I do have more of this written. It’s still pretty raw, though.

  5. Must not have been a pleasant message. I think you were wise to err on the side of caution. 🙂 Great six. Can’t wait for next week!

  6. Hmm, I wonder what it said. Great Six. 🙂


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