I’m re-writing a fight scene (for about the fourth time) and I don’t know how much to mention other characters within the scene. The main character (first person POV) is in hand-to-hand combat. How much would she notice of other people within her party? If she’s fighting for her life, would she logically pause to look for others and how they are doing? I’ve written this multiple times, but this keeps tripping me up. Any comments very welcome.